Lucy & Ben
One day in Scotland there was a girl named Lucy. Lucy was 3 years old and had blonde curly hair. One sunny Saturday her family went on a walk in the Highlands. It was really rocky and grassy there.
As she was walking she stumbled across a Scottish highland cow. Her dad said she can hug it because they are known to be friendly. Lucy fell in love with him so she decided to name him Ben.
Every day after school she would go to the highlands and feed Ben carrots and sugar beets. She would wonder why Ben couldn’t find the food. She then realized his hair was blocking his eyes.
The next day Lucy asked her dad to buy her clippers. As soon as Lucy arrived home from school her dad went with her to Ben. They gave ben a fringe so he can see. Ben thanked Lucy by licking her.
8 years later…
Lucy’s family was moving to New Zealand. When Lucy was told, she was devastated because she didn’t know how to take Ben. She looked in her bank account for money to get ben shipped to New Zealand with her. Lucy had just enough money. Lucy and her dad went to court to ask for the ownership of max. They succeeded and flew to New Zealand.
The end
By Paris
hi its jahvys i liked how you described the characters and how included long wards and i liked it because you added new Zealand but next time remember to check you punctuation
ReplyDeleteHi Paris I really liked your story because it was about a problem being solved TWICE. SO COOL!!! I also liked how you had PERFECT punctuation.Maybe next time add some more detail and make it a bit longer. When I was little I had curly hair like Lucy. Good work!
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