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Hi I'm Emily from Grey Main School. Maybe next time you could add some more descriptive words and punctuation but other than that it looks good.
ReplyDeleteHi Paris,Was your dad by chance muscular.And add punctuations and capital letters.I like your drawing by the way.
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